Sunday, 8 April 2012
Doctor Who: Rory's Trip
Worked on this. I think Amy's gonna draw it.
I just wanted to write something. Was fun.
Doctor Who is property of the BBC.
EDIT: Amy drew it!
PAGE 1
ONE:
We see the interior of THE TARDIS. Inside are THE DOCTOR, AMY
and RORY. AMY and RORY are stood to one side as THE DOCTOR
fiddles with THE TARDIS CONTROLS.
RORY
Now Doctor .. when you said
'birthday surprise' ..well.. this
isn't gonna be something weird, is
it?
TWO:
A 'two-shot'. We can see the back of THE DOCTOR - as if we're
stood behind him looking at RORY.
RORY (CONT'D)
I mean, time and space travel -
it's always sort of weird but .. I
just mean we aren't going to see
squids .. playing tennis .. or
something .. are we?
THREE:
THE DOCTOR's face lights up in amusement. He's excited.
THE DOCTOR
That sounds amazing! Let's find a
place where we can watch that! Wait.
No. There was a plan. Let's do the
plan...
RORY
Which is?
FOUR:
We're now outside THE TARDIS. THE DOCTOR, AMY and RORY are
now surrounded by what looks like a cross between a space
station and a football stadium. Very futuristic. The sky
overhead is open, revealing stars and planets and beautiful
nebulae.
THE DOCTOR
Oh y'know... Just the universe's
first "Worlds Cup"..
RORY
Football?
THE DOCTOR
Football.
FIVE:
Close up on RORY. He has a huge grin on his face.
PAGE 2
ONE:
RORY is shown to be walking ahead, possibly looking at some
of the alien refreshments. THE DOCTOR and AMY are walking a
little bit slower behind him.
RORY (MOSTLY OFF PANEL)
Ooh, let's get some glorblox bits!
AMY
Well. Rory's fitting in. Worlds
Cup?
THE DOCTOR
Right. Like the 'world cup' but..
Well, every planet in the universe
wanted to play.
TWO:
AMY has a look of apprehension on her face, looking a little
freaked out.
AMY
EVERY planet? We're not gonna bump
into a Dalek here are we?
THE DOCTOR
Well, not EVERY, obviously. Few
exceptions. Daleks couldn't play
anyway. No legs..
THREE:
THE DOCTOR and AMY continue to walk behind RORY. AMY now has
a smile on her face as she looks at THE DOCTOR, she clearly
found his comment funny.
PAGE 3
ONE:
RORY, THE DOCTOR and AMY are sat up in the stands now (in
that order). Even though the soccer station is very
futuristic, the seats are just metal versions of wooden
benches that don't have any backs. They're surrounded by all
sorts of aliens from around the Doctor Who universe. (Cameo
of Ice Warriors please?) There's a SILURIAN sat behind AMY.
RORY is very clearly lost in the game, sat on the edge of his
seat.
TWO:
The SILURIAN grabs AMY and starts to drag her away as she
struggles, his hand over her mouth to muffle her screams. Not
that her screaming is much of an issue - because one of the
teams just scored a goal. RORY and THE DOCTOR have both
jumped up, completely oblivious to what's happening around
them.
RORY
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL!
THREE:
They're now sat back down. This one is a small panel of THE
DOCTOR, having noticed now that the sound of cheering fans had
died away.
FOUR:
THE DOCTOR
Rory.
RORY is still engrossed in the game. He's on his feet again
looking angry.
RORY
OH COME ON! THAT KICK WAS -SO- ANTI
GRAVITY OFFSIDE!
FIVE:
THE DOCTOR sighs as he walks away in the direction of THE
SILURIAN, leaving RORY to watch the game.
PAGE 4
ONE:
CAPTION: Later..
THE TARDIS CREW has been reunited in the marketplace. RORY
seems very relaxed. THE DOCTOR and AMY appear to have been
covered in lime green goo. They look like something quite
possibly tried to turn them into or baste them in giant
glorblox bits.
RORY
Well I had fun.. and nothing weird
happened! Successful trip, I'd say.
TWO:
THE DOCTOR looks bemused. AMY just looks angry.
RORY (O.S.) (CONT'D)
What?
THREE:
AMY storms off towards the TARDIS.
FOUR:
RORY is now stood looking bewildered at THE DOCTOR, who has a
look of absolute amusement on his face.
RORY (CONT'D)
What'd I say? ..and what's that
smell?
CAPTION: END.
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I really felt that the Doctor parts are well written, I could naturally hear it in his voice.
ReplyDeleteIt really, really feels like something he'd say.
I really like this script! Very well done!